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posted by
shypettite
on January 16, 2007 at 9:36 PM
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Don't cry.......just go straight and ask her out.....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 16, 2007 at 9:13 PM
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LOVE IS VERY SWEET had never know the tears or the pains but others make it rude and rough when they cross the road between you and your love
LOVE IS GOD AND GOD NEVER HURT ANY ONE
HE IS OUR SAVIOR LOVE IS THE LIGHT NEVER BEEN THE DARKNESS
LOVE IS THE FREEDOM from the identity never been chains of pains yes we cry when the life and the Greed avoid and devide ..............
.............najwa the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on January 16, 2007 at 11:48 AM
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love is full of beauty pleasure and suffer ..when you start you know what
will face you but we cant resist it itis strength more than our ability to ressist its beauty
posted by
drohan254
on January 16, 2007 at 10:50 AM
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Shadow
Sometimes love isn’t that easy – but sometimes the rose is actually a rose and it’s our minds that turn it into something it’s not. Beautiful crafting of words.
posted by
Troosha
on January 16, 2007 at 10:49 AM
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Shadow
So beautiful yet it had a saddness about it also good write
posted by
Kat02
on January 16, 2007 at 9:51 AM
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You have used a good symbol to express your experience form love .
It's simply beautiful I should say .
posted by
afzal50
on January 16, 2007 at 8:34 AM
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shadow pen--how lovely-but is there a reflection of
'broken hearts?'Chris,
posted by
Scramble
on January 16, 2007 at 8:28 AM
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Wow, very beautiful, with a touch of sadness
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 16, 2007 at 7:09 AM
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