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bwFrampton, richinstore, Ted_William, mirash88, Scramble, lionladroar, star4you...
Well, I finally have a stable internet connection, so I am slinking out of bad manners and answering comments a bit late. *Hides*
Thanks so much for commenting, all of you. A few personal responses below, that needed elaboration...
bwFrampton, as for the inspiration for this... it's a little hard to put into words, a lot of the lines come from different places, and it would take a lot to explain. In general, it's about moving on, or at least trying to move on. The thing about time stopping--time won't continue until I let go. The paragraph about almost-shed skin, that's about the presence of two differnet selfs, who I am think I am, and a shadow, that represents the other part of me. Part of me thinks I am moving forward, and part lags behind, refusing to let go. So, to put it more simply, it's about the process of trying to move forward, but not quite able to let go yet. The 'you' is the one that I have to answer to, the one I can't let go of. Hopefully that made sense!
Scramble, yes, there are a lot of questions inside of me. Some I just can't find answers to. But, I think that one of the greatest parts of life is the questions, and it gives us purpose, something to wonder about and search for the answer to, even though it may be frustrating at times.
lionladroar, that's a very beautiful and thoughtful comment, thank you so much.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 25, 2007 at 8:38 PM
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beautiful, whom you wrote this...
posted by
star4sky5
on January 21, 2007 at 10:53 PM
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Hi NightMagic
Very deep and tantalizing thoughts the first cut is the deepest, then the last cut hurts sometimes just a little bit more because its still fresh in our minds, excellent verse friend. Thank you for posting I enjoyed.
posted by
lionladroar
on January 21, 2007 at 3:54 PM
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Lovely NightMagic--so many questions within you?
Hope your Soul Searching brings you the answers.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 21, 2007 at 9:05 AM
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Night,
This poem is full of so deep feelings; I like it much.
posted by
mirash88
on January 21, 2007 at 7:06 AM
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NM, another brilliant work...sidewalks, lake and stars...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 21, 2007 at 7:00 AM
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Hello, Night Majik.
posted by
richinstore
on January 21, 2007 at 6:23 AM
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N-M
Though I would like to hear the foundation to this poem, I do not need to in order to enjoy reading this fine work. Very good!
posted by
bwFrampton
on January 21, 2007 at 6:07 AM
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