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Hey Shadow pen, I placed that Rock Star story again, you all can name
as you wish, but I won't change the name and the story is only mine.......HAHAHAHA
posted by
star4sky5
on January 25, 2007 at 6:53 AM
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passionflower - good question. The poem should be read with the title
right from the start." Is it no so....when you ......?" They are open questions as well as affirmations. They would work equally well without the ?. Thanks. keep well.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 25, 2007 at 6:12 AM
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Clever poem - such is the uncertainty that never quite goes...
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 24, 2007 at 12:15 PM
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Oh! So lovely! Gave me chills!
posted by
mobedder
on January 24, 2007 at 9:02 AM
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Well said shadow .
posted by
afzal50
on January 24, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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This is very lovely...
However, I question the use of question marks in all but the last line. Why are those others there?
posted by
Passionflower
on January 24, 2007 at 8:44 AM
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HI SHADOW ITIS SO BEAUTIFUL FRIEND
LOVE ,FRIENSHIP IS COMITTMENT AND CARE IF YOURS WILL NOT DO WHO ELSE WILL CARE...IN THE BAD BEFORE THE GOOD DAYS ALWAYS WE HAVE TO BE THERE ,WE REMEMBERED ALWAYS WHO WAS THERE WHEN WE WERE IN SO NEED FOR ONE
posted by
drohan254
on January 24, 2007 at 8:38 AM
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Shadow
I love the “testimonial” nuance of this poem. It shouts love, commitment, and appreciation. Whoever you wrote this for should feel very honoured. It’s a gift.
posted by
Troosha
on January 24, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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whom ever you wrote must be lucky .....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 24, 2007 at 6:33 AM
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