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shadow pen, I send you and them some music......plus filled your email box.
hahaha
posted by
star4sky5
on January 26, 2007 at 8:40 PM
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you selected wrong name, I know a fred who is five year old........then
know one with 95......so how do I fit, please be little more kind, I am only 72 years.....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 26, 2007 at 5:47 AM
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Nice poem
posted by
afzal50
on January 26, 2007 at 12:07 AM
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Tony - Thou art probably right - Hey I'm no expert either....
I have read quite a few of Shakespeare's 150 odd sonnets, and still not sure when thou should be thee! But it sure sound pleasing to the ear and as you rightfully say, "without seriously disrupting the beauty of the poem". Great comment, thanks.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 25, 2007 at 11:38 PM
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Troosha- I've never been an expert writing in olde English...
I'm just an ardent Shakespeare fan and I suppose having read a lot about his plays and sonnets, it does help to evolve one's mind to think & write like him? I admit though, I'm will always come a poor second to him. Thanks for your good comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 25, 2007 at 11:33 PM
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justlife - Thanks for the comment- No I haven't posted anything
on Fanstory ... great that you popped in. Good luck
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 25, 2007 at 11:24 PM
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Nicely Done...
Did you ever post on Fanstory at one time..your flavor seems very familar to me?
Enjoyed it
posted by
Justlife
on January 25, 2007 at 3:57 PM
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Shadow
it produced, no less, the unnamable. Now there’s a beautiful line about love. Does writing in 18th century “Old English” come easy for you? I’ve never been able to wrap my head around it…
Lovely poem, Shadow.
posted by
Troosha
on January 25, 2007 at 11:39 AM
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Shadow - as usual, a really pleasing poem.
Although I'm no expert, though, you need to use 'thou' sometimes instead of 'thee'. Such changes could be made without seriously disrupting the beauty of the poem, so don't worry. I'm not sure where you go for 'thee' and 'thou' classes though!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 25, 2007 at 8:59 AM
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beautiful shadow
posted by
drohan254
on January 25, 2007 at 8:54 AM
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Shadow pen,
nice post
posted by
richinstore
on January 25, 2007 at 8:20 AM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on January 25, 2007 at 6:59 AM
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