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Clarehill - How many ways...
can I thank you for your kind comment? Will this one be enough?
posted by
shadow-pen
on February 1, 2007 at 5:17 AM
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How many ways...
can I say that I like this poem? I hope this one will be enough.
posted by
ClareHill
on January 31, 2007 at 12:57 PM
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Afzal -thanks for the visit.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:18 AM
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Shypettite - Thanks for the beautiful Rose....I love roses..how did u know?
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:17 AM
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Netty21 - Appreciate your comment. thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:16 AM
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Brownie - thanks for your comment... or should I name you Rich?
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:15 AM
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Drohan -you are always so warm & understand..........
maybe I need to go out there and take her hand...and stand beside her...I'm sure it will make her feel appreciated.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:14 AM
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Tony- yep, I wonder if women really understand how hard we really try..
but I think they know our secret....that we just cannot live without them?
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:10 AM
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star - If I was saying the same things about you...would you want me
to keep it a secret? Hahaha ... now don't go head over heels...
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:06 AM
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Troosha - your analysis is spot on...a wierd breed?....don't be so
hard on yourselves...I love women to be different! Life would be so boring without them. Despite what I'm saying here, this one definitely stole my heart ... and everything else...yeah and I'm still wondering what happened. great comment, tks.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 1:03 AM
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King Hearts - The problem starts when their eyes meet yours...
we become weak in the knees..then fall in love head over heels...then all caution goes out the window...all differences disappear...well that's love for you! thanks for your comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 12:57 AM
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SHADOW, PEOPLE AREDIFFERENT, WHEN IT COMES TO LOVE, HANDLE IT VERY CAREFUL
BECAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHETHER THEY LOOK AT YOU THE SAME " EYE TO eye"
posted by
KING_HEARTS
on January 29, 2007 at 11:32 AM
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so beautiful shadow ..she has to see it ...if realy she is great
she will so much appreciate .....women are more easy to be read for the man who could know in time of need beside her just to stand ......go to her .....hold the hand ....the women has so many brand ..but the key in the some falled in sand so if you able to search all the land ..then you able to understand
posted by
drohan254
on January 29, 2007 at 11:28 AM
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Shadow
I’m afraid your poem describes most women – present one moment, and emotionally gone the next. We’re a weird breed and far too introspective for our own good. A man can see black and know it’s black. A woman can see black and wonder how it came to be, how it might be changed, and how it’s impacting her psyche. Meanwhile the man is standing there wondering what the hell just happened. I’m with Star – she better not read this. Lovely poem…..
posted by
Troosha
on January 29, 2007 at 8:54 AM
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Shadow, very beautiful ways you expressed her, but make sure she won't see
it, because she will go head over heels...you must keep it as a secret.....hahaha
posted by
star4sky5
on January 29, 2007 at 8:49 AM
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Shadow, again you've got that old-fashioned style nicely captured.
It also captures very well that elusive quality that can be so enchanting and frustrating at the same time.
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 29, 2007 at 6:13 AM
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Shadow pen,
Let me answer your question: 'How many more ways shall I name you?'
Well, you can call me 'Rich' or even 'Brownie' if you like.
posted by
richinstore
on January 29, 2007 at 6:06 AM
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Great poem
posted by
netty21
on January 29, 2007 at 5:08 AM
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posted by
shypettite
on January 29, 2007 at 4:16 AM
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Excellent poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 29, 2007 at 2:50 AM
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