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posted by
star4sky5
on February 2, 2007 at 12:39 PM
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Passion - Oh for Summer, beaches, bikinis, bronze bodies....
oodles to goggle at...suntan lotion..on your body...my hands.....oh shadow..don't wake up!!!
posted by
shadow-pen
on February 2, 2007 at 12:40 AM
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Hana- Don't worry, I am visited by a guardian angel so now and
then, but they don't stay. My real key I still have locked away for that someone special! Do you still have your key locked away?
posted by
shadow-pen
on February 2, 2007 at 12:36 AM
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Bhaskar - thanks for stopping by with words of appreciation..
i'm sure we , as writers, are all inspired by nature, and perhaps, the lucky ones, by a wonderful Muse.
posted by
shadow-pen
on February 2, 2007 at 12:33 AM
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mobedder - I was sitting on my porch, high between the mountains in
our valley (minus the brandy!). AT that altitude the night sky with stars, moon and everything else seems touchable, the sounds more audible. What more does one need for inspiration and reflection?
posted by
shadow-pen
on February 2, 2007 at 12:28 AM
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shadow-pen
This was like sitting beneath a huge tree on a summer's evening, with my Brandy beside me, and then being transported within...like a vessel which needs refilling...I read it over and over. Very lovely. I know your angles will be there.
posted by
mobedder
on February 1, 2007 at 9:36 PM
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shadpw-pen
What a beautiful start "
Serenity permeates the peaceful nocturnal tapestry", to a fantastic denouement! I fall short of words.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 1, 2007 at 10:12 AM
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this time the last three lines are very beautiful ..yes you have to keep
the door open but be careful so many people will visit you .....from me my visitor has to be choosen by me ..so it is early to open the doors so hide the key some
where
posted by
drohan254
on February 1, 2007 at 9:57 AM
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This is so touching and beautiful--
And I do so wish it were summer...
posted by
Passionflower
on February 1, 2007 at 9:51 AM
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