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Thanks :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 9, 2007 at 12:43 PM
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I've read it again, this is full of emotion, of love and pain, yet still there's that ray of hope that it will all turn out. Very strong.
posted by
mneme
on February 9, 2007 at 12:40 AM
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I could feel your angst here!
posted by
Passionflower
on February 6, 2007 at 9:44 PM
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Thanks mneme :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 6, 2007 at 8:41 PM
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I'm going to have to come back and read this again, there were several thoughts that I liked. I saw your nickname in Tonyzonit and was sucked in. I'm not sure I could spell it but it is eye-catching! Nice to meet you.
posted by
mneme
on February 6, 2007 at 3:19 AM
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Thanks :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 5, 2007 at 12:24 PM
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posted by
Blue_feathers
on February 5, 2007 at 4:35 AM
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It's beautifully written and expressed . Nice love poem but a bit painful .
posted by
afzal50
on February 5, 2007 at 1:00 AM
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