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posted by Rosetree on February 16, 2007 at 4:39 AM | link to this | reply

Shadow
It's not easy to make magic, or is it?

posted by richinstore on February 9, 2007 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

hey shadow.......

posted by star4sky5 on February 8, 2007 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

shadow-pen
A delightful breath of fresh air, hovering on the spiritual. A poem of rare beauty and of rare profundity. The Shakespearean end is you signature. Shall look forward to reading more often, of course.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 8, 2007 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

hi my friend ...so beautiful shadow and iam not
saying friend due to the poem for whom they dont know but because you are brave friend and one of the best here ..so forward

posted by drohan254 on February 7, 2007 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow
thy smile my cure,...  I always believe that when we're truly in love, a smile from our loved one can light up our heart.  Beautiful poem, Shadow. 

posted by Troosha on February 7, 2007 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

Great end, Shadow!

posted by Antonionioni on February 7, 2007 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Awwww...this is such a nice breath of fresh air!
Where is an available guy who can write poetry like this for all those lonely ladies out there?

posted by Passionflower on February 7, 2007 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

what's up shadow? Is she near ur plantation?I am happy for you...

posted by star4sky5 on February 7, 2007 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply