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This is really delicious!

posted by deelakreme on February 12, 2007 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply

Yea,all 'cept me got the Beatles' echo.Remember?My B/F got a Beatle haircut

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 9, 2007 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

I better change the subject now - it's painful for some of you!
By the way Afzal, you're right, there is an echo of Yeats there, plus many other things - I won't give them away but I'm surprised no-one got the Beatles one.

posted by Antonionioni on February 9, 2007 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

tony,
strawberry shake .... slurp..

posted by richinstore on February 9, 2007 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
That was so unfair I love chocolate and really can't eat it you made me hungry

posted by Kat02 on February 9, 2007 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice today, Tony. Sumptuous I'd say. Made me hungry too.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on February 9, 2007 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome - Inserting Cooking into poetry
Good lines, sir

posted by sailheat on February 9, 2007 at 2:34 AM | link to this | reply

Tonyzonit
A timely read.. gives me an appetite for the dinner I cooked and didn't feel like eating.

posted by mneme on February 9, 2007 at 12:49 AM | link to this | reply

It reminds me of YEATS Tread softly if you tread on my dreams.

posted by afzal50 on February 8, 2007 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

cool as usual

posted by star4sky5 on February 8, 2007 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Strawberry...chocolate...sugar..... GOD, I need a snack now! LOL

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on February 8, 2007 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

I feel so FULL after reading this...
And I'm on a big-time Sugar High...lol! Good writing! If I've gained any weight due to reading your poem, I'm going to be pissed!

posted by Passionflower on February 8, 2007 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha, you're probably right that the naughty stuff dominates!
Myself, I'm not a great fruit or vegetable eater, but that is because i don't like many of them, not because I don't want to. But they look lovely! Especially a bowl of mixed fruit - what could be more colourful? No wonder people used to paint still lives with fruit. This sonnet is really just painting with the colour and the texture of food in a similar way!

posted by Antonionioni on February 8, 2007 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

Tony
As I recall Sonnet 156 was about food temptations as well.  Have you got a sugar urge going on over there?  Well... you did mention some fruit today but that's not what stood out.  I'm eating sushi at the moment but would love something sweet.....

posted by Troosha on February 8, 2007 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Go for it, you non-Hegelian blonde, you!

posted by Antonionioni on February 8, 2007 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

the vending machine is calling after this...

posted by Blue_feathers on February 8, 2007 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks guys, but there is some healthy fruit in there as well!!
Yes, you're right, El Tel, I have been very hungry the last couple of days. I'm not alone, either. We think it might be the cold spell we're having the last couple of days!

posted by Antonionioni on February 8, 2007 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

Tony

 

Uh, huh. What is it with you, Mr Zonit, or should one say Sonnet?

All this food obsession! Doesn't anyone feed you, my man? Aha! Methinks I have the answer!

You've become a victim of the anti-fat Nazis, haven't you? Nulli desperandum, and all that!

BTW thank you for your comments.

posted by ariel70 on February 8, 2007 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

Tony
It's a good thing I had just finished lunch before reading this - I might have gone on a sugar binge.  Then again, I probably will anyways.

Be well,

-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on February 8, 2007 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

My blood sugar went up 50 points just reading this. MoonSpirit

posted by syzygy on February 8, 2007 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

posted by jasoncaron on February 8, 2007 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply