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I just want to smack that cigarette away from that mother...
I suppose hard times have made her that way. Nice characterization. :)
posted by
Pat_B
on February 18, 2007 at 11:41 AM
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Great dialect!
I love the little boy, too.
posted by
Jadelynn
on February 13, 2007 at 9:21 PM
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Ariel,
just to let you know that I am really enjoying this...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 13, 2007 at 11:09 AM
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still with you, ariel, and enjoying each part...great description, good
narrative, and just enough action..
.(after all, you're not writing the Charge of the Light Brigade or such)...
..
posted by
Rumor
on February 13, 2007 at 6:51 AM
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