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Thanks everyone :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 13, 2007 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Well done. Succinct and poignant.

posted by saul_relative on February 13, 2007 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply

Dis

"should" or "shoudn't".. two words Im trying to eliminate from my vocabulary.

I like your poetry.

posted by Blue_feathers on February 13, 2007 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

Ingtriguing.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on February 13, 2007 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

Very sensuous .

posted by afzal50 on February 13, 2007 at 1:47 AM | link to this | reply