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tonyzonit
nothing wrong with the everyday - the life of a Monday or Tuesday (Virginia Woolf) - or even a Saturday.

posted by mneme on February 20, 2007 at 3:03 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Afzal, Deepananda and Bhaskar

Yes, I like ordinariness too - people can relate to it, and it's nice to dress it up in verse.

Bhaskar, I'll have to give you some coaching.

posted by Antonionioni on February 18, 2007 at 1:47 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
The delight of ordinariness being the theme of you sonnet today is appealing especially the winning bit that could make so much difference in building our own Rome/s. I must win a bet to build one for myself. But I fail everytime, and draw satisfaction from your's. Hahaa

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 17, 2007 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Tony
I love poetry and your style is captivating. How such simple things of life can be penned in verse.

posted by DEEPANANDA on February 17, 2007 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

I would love to make that kind of a house . True Rome was not built in a
Day.

posted by afzal50 on February 17, 2007 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha, you gather correctly that I haven't done so well today.
I've only recently started, though, and I'm up overall, so I'm hopeful it might provide a second income, which can make all the difference. I do other betting too, on the financial markets - that is potentially more lucrative. As for the content of my stuff, its cos i try to make it similar to a diary, but if there's nothing exciting to talk about, why not just talk about the ordinariness of daily life. If only I met more celebs, I could make catty comments about them, or namedrop to improve my status, but I don't!! It's ordinariness or nothing, i'm afraid! 

posted by Antonionioni on February 17, 2007 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply

Does bleach actually kill germs tho, Whinge, or just bleach them?

posted by Antonionioni on February 17, 2007 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

Discom - Glad you agree how much better I am!

posted by Antonionioni on February 17, 2007 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Tony

I know nothing about soccer but I gather your bets (wins and losses) are not going get you to your cottage by the sea. I am so often amazed at how you take something so simple – Saturday chores, a soccer match, a dream of living outside the city and craft it into verse.

posted by Troosha on February 17, 2007 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

I did the bathroom today too, went mental with the bleach.
I didn't win any money however... so you've got the edge there.

posted by CringeintheUSA on February 17, 2007 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

So that's what Shakespeare was lacking!
I never could put my finger on it before.

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 17, 2007 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply