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R.I. Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments.They are much
appreciated-always>Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 19, 2007 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

as has been said, "the eyes have it" and if a person can't look you

in the eye, per Judge Judy, they are likely lying...

but the eyes of innocence have it all: love, trust, security.....well said as always, Chris.....

posted by Rumor on February 19, 2007 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

.DAVE. thank you for your comment--the 'eyes' hold so much truths--
(or otherwise).Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 19, 2007 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

stbond-thank you for reading and your comment.Yes-so far so good!
They remain-Angelic. Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 19, 2007 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you for popping in and leaving your comment Neil-Shalom-Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 19, 2007 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

It's the greatest truth of all, that look, that innocence.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on February 19, 2007 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

I know. . .
sometimes looking at a baby or small child makes you aware of how careful we all have to be to keep those eyes bright for as long as possible. I hope they're still angelic.

posted by stbond on February 18, 2007 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply

Your "eyes" have it! Brava!
keep on keeping on, -shalom from -Neil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on February 18, 2007 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Bless you Troosh-it's good to have your comment.Thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 18, 2007 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you very much afzal-your comment is appreciated. Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 18, 2007 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS-I can't recall 'judge Judy'-but I certainly Know what you mean!
I also-need to see peoples eyes when I'm in conversation with them-that's my way of knowing if I can trust them.Thank you for your comment. Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 18, 2007 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble

The innocence shining from a baby’s eyes well expressed.

posted by Troosha on February 18, 2007 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Good work.

posted by afzal50 on February 18, 2007 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

Very good, Scramble.
This made me switch over in my mind to Judge Judy on TV.   She is always yelling to the plaintiff or defendant, "Look at me!  I want to see your eyes!  I can tell if you are lying by looking in your eyes!"   When babies, what hides behind those windows is so innocent.  It doesn't take long for secrets and impurities to begin to dwell inside.

posted by TAPS. on February 18, 2007 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply