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Fourcats - true - but I'd ne'er trey oot the Glasgae or Rabbie Burns lingo!

posted by Antonionioni on February 22, 2007 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Tel - Yer got me bang ter rights, guv!

posted by Antonionioni on February 22, 2007 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

this is like trying to understand my dad when he switches to scottish
brogue.  huh?

posted by fourcats on February 22, 2007 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Tony

 

'er, moosh, wotchu fink yor playin' at, eh?

Wot you just writ dahn there looks more like wot you 'ear when yer workin' wiv them Paddies on a Wimpey site! An' a Paddy wot ain't got no 'ampsteads, neiver! 

Gawd, I ain't never seen such a right loada  Old Muvver Ubbard in me natchrul!

You can get lessons in cockney argot from Alfie on my blog, you know. Well, of course you do, old chap ; you're a regular visitor, aren't you?

 

posted by ariel70 on February 22, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

Tony--that's jst great! You are right-you can't 'explain' how it should
sound-I tried one-last year! The reader has to put his/her own emphasis on the words.It really sounds authentic to me.Great.Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 22, 2007 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

Star - it's a Cockney guy meeting the devil in a pub in the London area!

posted by Antonionioni on February 22, 2007 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

Cor, love a duck, bladdy marvellous, ta Wiley, Star n Discom!

posted by Antonionioni on February 22, 2007 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply

I thought you might've been inspired by Bhaskar.ing's post

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 21, 2007 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

cool, but I don't know the meaning..

posted by star4sky5 on February 21, 2007 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

Tonyzonit

I loved that, you have it down pat as I remember it mate, wonderful. I hung out in London some in the 50's, loike when the Goon Show was on, wif Neddie and all.

I ran wif a girl from Liverpool in them days, she come down to see me off on the ship out of Southampton it was.

Don't ever quit writing Tony, you a natural hoss.

posted by WileyJohn on February 21, 2007 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, ST, you must. I've noticed that everyone says 'dang' now?
Do you?

posted by Antonionioni on February 21, 2007 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Whinge - do they say 'divil' like we say 'Gawd' - to avoid saying the
proper word, in case you get struck down? I've lost a few quid tonight - I've had the divil of a bad run lately. Still probably slightly up overall - nowt to worry about.

posted by Antonionioni on February 21, 2007 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

I knew it was cockney. . .
because I've read Dickens and seen "My Fair Lady." Maybe I'll torment you by writing with a thick American Southern drawl, y'all!


posted by stbond on February 21, 2007 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

No, my granny told me too many stories about the men playing cards with the
stranger, gambled with their souls, only to realise they'd lost them to the devil ('divil' she'd say) upon seeing smoldering cloven hoof prints under the table.

That woman (may she rest in peace) told me the best stories and gave me the worst nightmares and lovingly terrorised me for my childhood.

Sonnet sounds like Del boy meeting the master there.



posted by CringeintheUSA on February 21, 2007 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply