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afzal50, Kat02, Discombobulated78, star4you

Thank you for your comments!

afzal50 - Thanks~ <3

Kat02 - Thank you so much for commenting. ^_^ I am glad the love and care made it across.

Discombobulated78 - Thank you, I drifted away from rhyme for a long time, I have begun to play with it more now, though. I'm glad you enjoyed this!

star4you - Thank you my dear~~

posted by NightMajik on February 26, 2007 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on February 22, 2007 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

Ooooh I love the rhyme in this!
And the word unburden is unusual.  

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 22, 2007 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Night
very loving and caring poem

posted by Kat02 on February 22, 2007 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Touching poem.

posted by afzal50 on February 22, 2007 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply