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Outstanding!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 1, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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Beautiful, MarieClaire
Its so comforting that its always there, even when like today the gray clouds get between and keep it out of sight.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 25, 2007 at 10:16 AM
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Marie-Claire
Thise are the things that never change aren't they, the sun and the sky - both are inspiring.
posted by
mneme
on February 24, 2007 at 6:20 AM
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Marieclaire
Fabulous ending! It left me with a peaceful and warm feeling.
posted by
Troosha
on February 23, 2007 at 8:37 AM
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Beautiful thoughts
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on February 23, 2007 at 5:44 AM
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Glad those clouds got chased.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 23, 2007 at 1:26 AM
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This clicks with me so well
I truly loved this poem. The colors and the lifetime-feeling progression of it are well received.
posted by
ModernBoz
on February 23, 2007 at 12:22 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on February 23, 2007 at 12:13 AM
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