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Thanks mneme :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 27, 2007 at 10:19 AM
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Exactly Bhaskar
I thought about writing a commentary with the poem because I couldn't really convey the smell of the flowers, how they assaulted my nose, the heavy sweetness, and the thousand metaphors that sprang into my head. So I guess this the commentary.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 27, 2007 at 10:09 AM
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Discom
Beautiful, and exceptionally beautiful! Evocative of a long train of thought, difficult to confine here in words.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 27, 2007 at 5:51 AM
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discom
This is nice - I love the scent of flowers at night. You make a good point too about the way the lack of one sense is compensated by the strength in another.
posted by
mneme
on February 27, 2007 at 1:05 AM
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