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Nice Work
Great READ!
posted by
jasoncaron
on March 1, 2007 at 12:16 PM
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Ariel70
This is so beautiful, so beautiful! Thanks you for sharing.
posted by
Justi
on February 27, 2007 at 4:30 PM
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.Dave
Thank you.
I guess they don't teach kids precis these days, do they? Or anything else much, either!
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 9:29 AM
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Blonde
Ariel blushes ... deeply.
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 9:27 AM
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Lovely stuff, Terry. Yes, it's a good exercise too. I like to have a go at comps with maximum word counts and wrote my best piece for a long while recently under a 1000-word limit. Mind you, that's more than one side of A4, but it's the same principle - a careful weighing of words.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 27, 2007 at 9:22 AM
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Ariel
Of course they are for someone special......you, silly!
posted by
BlondeAmbition007
on February 27, 2007 at 9:19 AM
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Blonde
Thank you. Nice roses ... for someone special?LOL
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 9:18 AM
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Ariel
That was a beautiful story!
posted by
BlondeAmbition007
on February 27, 2007 at 9:11 AM
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rich
Thank you very much! Nice to be appreciated.
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 7:38 AM
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Tony
Well ... maybe, just a bit! Yep, woulda bin, wouldn't it?
Maybe next year ; if I'm still around.
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 7:37 AM
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Hi El Tel.
Be honest, this is autobiographical, innit? Eh? Very nice and concise and romantic. Would have been good for Valentine's Day!
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 27, 2007 at 7:32 AM
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ariel,
that was a very romantic seduction in its refined form. Such a beautiful post.
posted by
richinstore
on February 27, 2007 at 7:13 AM
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Corbin
Glad to have brought a ray of sunshine into your morming. It's been 21C here today.
Eat your heart outLOL
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 7:07 AM
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afzal
Thank you!
posted by
ariel70
on February 27, 2007 at 7:06 AM
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Excellent story . Extemely captivating .
posted by
afzal50
on February 27, 2007 at 6:29 AM
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What a bright spot.....
in an otherwise cloudy day!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on February 27, 2007 at 6:04 AM
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