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Thanks jason and Troosha :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on March 1, 2007 at 7:54 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome!
Very Very Nice! Keep up the good work.

posted by jasoncaron on March 1, 2007 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Dis..
If more people realized they are alone - but not alone - perhaps we would all experience a little more harmony in our lives. 

posted by Troosha on March 1, 2007 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Yes it is THE secret.
The biggest one I hold.

posted by Discombobulated78 on March 1, 2007 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

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"To everyone around us. We are alone. But not with one another". Yes, that's a secret!!! Or, should it be 'the' secret? Very evocative and sequential poetry. them.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 1, 2007 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

We are alone but not with one another . A common but very powerful
thought.

posted by afzal50 on March 1, 2007 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks najwa :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 28, 2007 at 11:32 PM | link to this | reply

I want to tell you that you are great in your short simple words
but who can hide the amazing secrets is the most powerfull souls,, but we are poets
Yes we are human ,,,,,,,,,,,najwa the stranger 

 

posted by NAJWA on February 28, 2007 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply