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Hi Dis- ... Man, he must be lucky......lucky to have been your inspiration.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 2, 2007 at 11:42 PM
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Thanks jasoncaron :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 2, 2007 at 11:37 PM
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I'm glad you're so taken with it Bhas!
A little commentary: The one whom I love most (the one who inspires most of my poetry), he said many months ago that he wished he could hold me
into him, so that's where the last line of the poem comes from.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 2, 2007 at 11:37 PM
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WOW!! That was just great passion storming !
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 2, 2007 at 10:19 PM
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Very Nice!
Great Work.
posted by
jasoncaron
on March 2, 2007 at 9:32 PM
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