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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on March 18, 2007 at 5:00 PM
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Captivating...Thank You.
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 6, 2007 at 7:48 PM
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so beautiful pelaqus
posted by
drohan254
on March 5, 2007 at 9:43 PM
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hi, thank you for your comments.
UnderwOrld because this was a dark part of my life & i would not believe the sky could be warm & soft. The underground would be a safer place to be. A place to hide to create love in a dark & gloomy place... my mind has always been made of many contrasts. This being one, creating one of the most beautiful thing on earth (love) in one of the most scary place (underground) 
posted by
pelagus
on March 5, 2007 at 9:05 PM
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Nice contrasts
Nice "heaven touching the earth" imagery
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 5, 2007 at 8:36 PM
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Another good one!
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 5, 2007 at 3:58 PM
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Well written .
posted by
afzal50
on March 5, 2007 at 12:34 PM
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why underworld?when You join,the heaven will come there.
rithwik.lancs
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 5, 2007 at 11:46 AM
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Great Job
Nice Poem
posted by
jasoncaron
on March 5, 2007 at 10:20 AM
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