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joaohna-I've just looked back and found your comment.How lovely.
Thank you--you are so passionate about reading and taking on board what you feel!Wonderfull-I will take a look at your site.Thanks again-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 3:17 AM
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THis is Instant karma at it's best, man!
I love the tenor of this poem. You grabbed on like a pit bull, and increased the intensity and it spiraled like an eagle... climbing in a thundercloud. then you pulled the lightning right at the exact correct moment. Wonderful.
this is the face of the victim when he read it, no doubt.
posted by
joaohnna
on March 9, 2007 at 8:17 PM
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Hi Troosha--many thanks for looking in and commenting!
Yes-he was pretty disgusting creature all round! I like your sense of humour.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 7, 2007 at 12:58 PM
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Scramble
Well that certainly delivered some "punch". What a disgusting thing to do (the postie, that is).
posted by
Troosha
on March 7, 2007 at 12:12 PM
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drohan-I have just 'popped back'-and found your comment.
Thank you so much-also-thank you for reading my post.It's much appreciated.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 7, 2007 at 7:00 AM
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SO BEAUTIFUL CHRISS
posted by
drohan254
on March 6, 2007 at 8:36 PM
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Shadow--I re-read it and yes-funny realy but I can 'hear' what you're
saying.It might be fun to try to change it-(time permitting).Thanks again.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 6, 2007 at 12:10 PM
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Rihwik.lancs--thank you for reading my post and for your comment.
It's much appreciated. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 6, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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Chris - It this was written in olde English then Shakespeare could have
use this in one of his plays!
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 6, 2007 at 5:45 AM
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first time coming across a warning turning to be a good poem.
rithwik.lancs
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 6, 2007 at 4:25 AM
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