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Lusterlove-thanks for reading and your comment.I appreciate that.
Do you mean-what you feel about someone seems to border on 'one sided'-or my poem borders on being one-sided? If it's you-then that's sad but their may be something you can do to create a better balance? If it's my poem-perhaps it's written from my friend's(female)-point of view? Equally-a balance is required I feel. Chris.
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Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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Scramble
I feel this way about someone, but it seems to border on one sided
posted by
Lanetay
on March 10, 2007 at 12:38 PM
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joaohna---thank you so much for reading my poems! I see you have read
some of my previous stuff-I looked back and have left comments for you! I have also been to visit your site-and read through your work.I can't say'I've been where you've been'-but I have experienced similar life style.That's why I write so 'emotionally'(?)and I believe that's a similar style to your own writing-and that's why we 'connect'.I enjoyed reading your writings! I will re-visit.God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 3:52 AM
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Hallo Kat my friend-yes I have heard that too-thank you so much for
leaving you comment. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 3:28 AM
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Thank you very much O.T.A-your comment is much appreciated.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 3:27 AM
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Thank you so much jacenta.Glad you like it.Chris.
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Scramble
on March 10, 2007 at 3:26 AM
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Sealed with a kiss....
I like this poem welly much, Chris. I read down through a few of them... and they are most wonderful. Full of emotion, and tenderness: the greatest power on earth. Bravo. My personal passion is John Lennon,,, late or on time, so to speak.. and I think you might enjoy reading the story I posted... sorry to beat a drum, I just really think you would like it. or I would really not mention it at all. Only because I am enjoying your stuff so much, and I know how one person can inspire the next. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Right about now.
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joaohnna
on March 9, 2007 at 8:02 PM
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Chris
They say if you have one good friend you are blessed , A beautiful poem from a wonderful friend
posted by
Kat02
on March 9, 2007 at 7:07 PM
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seal it with a kiss.. yes.. that sounds very special! Bravo
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 9, 2007 at 5:30 PM
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Scramble
What a lovely poem!
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jacentaOld
on March 9, 2007 at 5:25 PM
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Thank you so much NAJWA---so many lovely flowers-hugs and so much love!
God bless-Chris.
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Scramble
on March 9, 2007 at 12:28 PM
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rihwik--thank you very much for your comment.
It's greatly appreciated.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 9, 2007 at 12:27 PM
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Thank you afzal---yes I beieve you're right-the'kiss' says it all--
and I guess it's the 'kissing' that counts.Chris.
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Scramble
on March 9, 2007 at 12:25 PM
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jason--I'm sorry it didn't work out so well for you-hope all's well now?
The poem was for a friend and although we have 'lost touch' I've no reason to think they are not still together.But of course-only 'time will tell'.Thank you again.Chris.
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Scramble
on March 9, 2007 at 12:23 PM
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NAJWA
on March 9, 2007 at 10:34 AM
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kiss is the union.power of union is immense.someone is lucky to have it.
rithwik.lancs
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 9, 2007 at 10:11 AM
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Kiss is the key .Nice poem .
posted by
afzal50
on March 9, 2007 at 9:39 AM
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I Love this poem! It brought back to a time I shared with a friend in a
similar situation. Didn't work out so well for me, hope it does much more for you! Beautiful Poem!
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jasoncaron
on March 9, 2007 at 9:30 AM
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