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posted by
star4sky5
on March 23, 2007 at 8:50 PM
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Beautifull Shadow. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 23, 2007 at 1:56 PM
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shadow
nice poem.
posted by
richinstore
on March 23, 2007 at 8:51 AM
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The music of the words comes from thy pureness
And for finding the Poet's Heart in the true life ness
Our souls can build huge dreams in the word happiness
Or our tears when feed the summer trees from dryness
you had wrote beautifull words can green the wilderness
thank you,
,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on March 23, 2007 at 6:49 AM
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Chilitree - Thanks for your 3 Rose appreciation. Stay well.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 6:01 AM
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Hana - I appreciate your deep meaning comments- a Poet's dream..
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 6:00 AM
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Yeah, I try to make the reading of my poetry a pleasant experience..
easy on the ear as well. Thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:59 AM
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Mark - Thanks for popping in with your comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:56 AM
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OTA- All this dreamy love stuff was meant to to make a sensual
all American girl feel giddy and not sheepish. LOL
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:55 AM
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tony - What are we if we cannot dream? Dull boys & girls...thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:52 AM
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1Timesoldier
Thanks for good comment- it makes my effort worth it's while.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:49 AM
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Afzal - Appreciate yr comment friend.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:47 AM
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Proc - Still half South African & 100% female !! May you stay that way...
Thanks for saying hello & yr comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 23, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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Very philosphical and prophetic poem.
posted by
afzal50
on March 23, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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There is a touch of comfort in your words.
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 23, 2007 at 5:19 AM
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There is indeed a dreamlike quality to this - very enjoyable, Shadow!
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 23, 2007 at 4:49 AM
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all this dreamy love stuff makes me giddy too..being a girl and all..lol
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 23, 2007 at 4:39 AM
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lovely poem.makes me feel good being female and all
nice to meet another fellow south african although Im now half kiwi.
posted by
proc
on March 23, 2007 at 4:35 AM
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Good poem.
posted by
mark2556
on March 23, 2007 at 4:21 AM
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wonderful.good imagination,nice words,rhymes well too.
rithwik.lancs
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 23, 2007 at 3:21 AM
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prophetic nights and no more purer affection so beautiful shadow
posted by
drohan254
on March 23, 2007 at 2:51 AM
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Shadow...nice one.
posted by
Chilitree
on March 23, 2007 at 2:50 AM
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