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1TimeSoldier - Many thanks for a good comment..and your visit.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 6:27 AM
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Such power in your words...Thank You.
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 27, 2007 at 3:24 AM
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Star -how yr doing? hanks for the visit - will pop in later by your blog..
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:49 AM
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Brownie - tks a lot for the visit & comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:48 AM
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OTA - Thanks - My shadow-pen always writes from the heart...
How love should always be...isn't it so?
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:47 AM
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Tony - Your insight and comment always appreciated. Thanks.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:45 AM
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Foliagegold - That's exactly what genuine & true love does for the
receptive mind. I fully appreciate your response and am pleased that you found the sonnet something that you liked. Thanks for popping in.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:43 AM
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Lindo - Hi how are you? thanks for popping in with such an inspiring
comment. I feel very pleased I could produce a little gem for your read. Yes I do love & respect all women, they are a special creation. Appreciate your moivation.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:40 AM
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beautiful........
posted by
star4sky5
on March 27, 2007 at 2:36 AM
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Troosha - So special coming from you.
Yes women are a beautiful species to be honoured & praised. And of course loved!. They are definitely the romantic muses of us men....especially for me...how can it be otherwise? Especially when I look & read your work?
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:35 AM
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Hana - Thanks so much for your sweet comment. It means a lot to me..
Hope you stay well...and be special, always.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 27, 2007 at 2:31 AM
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so beautiful shadow...you keep blowing by your words
on her fire to increase in the turn your fire ...let the bleasure follow the melancholy
to stay always the muse of the heart
O Muse of my heart, truly thou keep my fires burning,
Shaping words that float upon the wings of my breath;
With nightingale voice in mine ears, melancholy,soothing,
Healing moments of silence, my soul nearing death.
'Twas thy first light upon my light in revelation,
posted by
drohan254
on March 26, 2007 at 10:35 AM
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Beautiful

Your poetry is laiden with enourmous respect and love for women that is very rare these days. It is finding gems like these that makes blogit such a wonderful place not just to writers but to readers.
posted by
lindo
on March 26, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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Nice work, Shadow - always a pleasure.
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 26, 2007 at 9:08 AM
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Shadow
Ok - now I've fully convinced. You lived in another time. You bring such life to words of love and shape them into sonnets that could have been read to lovers 100s of years ago. Beautiful.
posted by
Troosha
on March 26, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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". . . wings of my breath"
Oh my, I so loved those 4 words in particular. Lovely work!
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 26, 2007 at 7:10 AM
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Shadow
a sonnet well penned from the heart
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 26, 2007 at 7:07 AM
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Shadow,
lovely poem
posted by
richinstore
on March 26, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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