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So true
You are right about women always having a lover in their heart, soul or dream, it is impossible to survive life without love (real or "imagined'). I have reached a point where I wonder if there is more to love than what we were reared to expect, and your poem does touch on that... maybe the joy of love does not exist in this life but in the next one.
posted by
lindo
on March 30, 2007 at 7:09 AM
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Troosha - Sometimes I write about experiences, mine or about
other's and it appears that most of us has lived through such an experience. You've summed it up nicely, I fully appreciate your effort.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 29, 2007 at 6:41 AM
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Chris - Thanks so ever for always reading my work &
posting a kind comment
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 29, 2007 at 5:30 AM
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Hana - I always treasure your comment - so warm. Thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 29, 2007 at 5:28 AM
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FoliageGold -
Hope the memories were ones that lifted your spirits. It's how we deal with love that we lose that makes us a better person in later years. Many thanks for a good comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 29, 2007 at 5:27 AM
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Shadow Pen
Beautiful poetry big heart and spirit. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on March 29, 2007 at 12:50 AM
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OTA - A" teeny weeny itty bitty" glimpse of pain? None my dear...
I am 100% fine - But Do from time to time write about the past because other people may have been in a similar situation. Love your teeny weenie concern though. thanks
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shadow-pen
on March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Kat - Thanks for the concern. I am very well indeed. I tend to write also
from past experiences and I think some others may have had a similar experience. I make my point at the end saying that it doesn't matter how many times we are hurt because we have loved sincerely, we shall inherit twice the amount of happiness in Heaven.
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shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 11:51 PM
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Shadow
The losing of a soul mate is almost impossible to forget the pain and anguish shows so well in this poem , The unveiling of true feelings I hope you are well my friend
posted by
Kat02
on March 28, 2007 at 7:16 PM
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shadow_pen
Oh, this was so poignant for me to read. Perhaps it's because it's so close to my heart. Thank you for the remembrance; the memories surfaced....... --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 28, 2007 at 6:01 PM
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very clear pain and truth real love
would that be you so expressive so beautiful shadow
posted by
drohan254
on March 28, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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How lovely shadow.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 28, 2007 at 12:38 PM
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The quest for the Soul Mate is the quest for God. Blessings in your quest. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on March 28, 2007 at 11:59 AM
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When the distances are so far and reaching that light becomes wish star,,
our souls together two in one can be one hand.......
.....your words are the Gold ink very Unique and inspire me to more........thank you.........the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on March 28, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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HEY SHADOW........
posted by
star4sky5
on March 28, 2007 at 7:58 AM
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Shadow
a teeny tiny itty bitty .. glimpse of pain.. is it there?
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 28, 2007 at 7:50 AM
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Shadow
Even love lost stays with us (as you said) for eternity so it’s never wasted time or energy. In fact, I think it teaches us how to be a better man or woman. Although it’s true that everyone has a vision of their “soul mate” sometimes we find ourselves falling in love with someone who doesn’t quite conform to that dream. With an open heart and an open mind the opportunity for love abounds. A wonderful sentiment expressed well, Shadow.
posted by
Troosha
on March 28, 2007 at 6:59 AM
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Great thought . Lovely poem .
posted by
afzal50
on March 28, 2007 at 6:04 AM
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