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your poems are wonderful and tender ful with love and glory for the GOD i like it sure i do,,,,,,,,,stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on April 4, 2007 at 11:46 AM
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beautiful poem and beautiful coments too
posted by
star4sky5
on April 4, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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Troosha - Yes, even the busiest insect finds time to stop & meditate
around beauty. Thanks for a beautiful comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 6:43 AM
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Hana - a Bee is always found buzzing around beauty.. but finds time
to stop and savour it in moments of stillness.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 6:41 AM
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Lindo - yes you're right. Hope we never have to say" I was too busy".....
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 6:38 AM
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so beautiful romantic shadow
the bee... her place above flower ..above tree ..and from the melody ...,rose is she
posted by
drohan254
on April 4, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on April 3, 2007 at 9:43 PM
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food for thought.
A beautiful poem shadow, reading the comments has helped me understand it better. I agree that bees and meditation are an odd combo, but it works well: a message to find peace and love in our hectic lives.
posted by
lindo
on April 3, 2007 at 3:19 PM
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posted by
NAJWA
on April 3, 2007 at 10:18 AM
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Shadow
Ahhhhh... those moments. You must know by now (from
my poetry) that I embrace "moments" and all too often we skip through them or past them without truly appreciating what just occured. Great poem about capturing moments.
posted by
Troosha
on April 3, 2007 at 8:30 AM
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shadow
Well shadow, you certainly write lovely comments as well! Thank you. Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 3, 2007 at 8:20 AM
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FoliageGold - aaaahh - such sweet honey dripping words from someone
who definitely knows how & when to stop for nourishment of the soul. And in those moments of silence, finds the joy of meditating. Thanks for the comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 3, 2007 at 8:14 AM
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shadow
Ah, yes, those moments we stop for nourishment of the soul and turn into honey. Lovely! --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 3, 2007 at 8:09 AM
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Chris - I agree. especially those moments that only one's heart can
recognise with someone or something. I think you know which "special" moments I'm talking about. Thanks for the comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 3, 2007 at 8:08 AM
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OTA- I simply love that comment -" It has me thinking".!
As for change of pace? Maybe i'm testing calmer waters before I take the plunge! I love your visits. don't stay away.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 3, 2007 at 8:06 AM
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Lovely shadow-it says to me 'make the most of every moment for----
life is too short to miss any opportunity.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 7:26 AM
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Shadow
this is a change of pace for you.. I like it. It has me thinking.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 3, 2007 at 7:23 AM
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Moonspirit - That's an interesting point you're making - maybe
everything & everybody isn't all about what we see or perceive. Shouldn't we all be meditating when we are close to someone "special", you know those magical moments of silence between two people? Thanks for your comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 3, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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Shadow, I hesitate to use the word 'interesting' but, interesting use of contrasts. The bee is always, always 'busy' but, you have him meditating among the leaves as he goes about his 'busy-ness' and, yes, I think that is how we must be(e). MoonSpirit
posted by
syzygy
on April 3, 2007 at 6:40 AM
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