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my favorite time and always i love to write before sun rise ..very lovely time with beautiful words when to know with whom to be shared ..the words are so precious and with whom we share it need so much thoughts so many eyes with one nose to choose proper receiver..words covered with morning dew shadow
posted by
drohan254
on April 7, 2007 at 2:24 PM
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Shadow
windchimes are not quite the same.... lol
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 5, 2007 at 6:45 AM
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OTA
And you cuddle up tighter into a ball, so warm and snug......ooohh that's nice OTA. Must buy me a windchime....or get a lover. haha
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 5, 2007 at 6:02 AM
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Shadow
the comfort of love in early morning is one of life's greatest blessings.. like the windchimes outside my window when I awake
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 5, 2007 at 4:18 AM
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star - Hope you wake up with beautiful noises & knowing someone is
out there waiting to hold you closer.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:32 PM
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Afzal -thanks for commenting.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:31 PM
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raes - Glad you appreciated my poem- thanks for the comment
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:30 PM
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najwa
I'm sure you agree that a little early morning prayer for love from someone is special? Thanks for the heart.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:25 PM
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Troosha - thanks. Isn't it nice waking up knowing that there is someone
out there that may hold you a llittle closer today than yesterday?
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:24 PM
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Chris - thanks- I'm glad I got the mood and effect right.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:22 PM
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moonspirit -
I know you like nice things in life, especially when they touch your inner spirit. thanks.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:17 PM
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Tony - yeah I know what you mean -especially on weekends. Thanks for
a touching comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 11:15 PM
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Shadow-Pen
This is REALLY beautiful. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on April 4, 2007 at 6:22 PM
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Shadow-softly flowing-nice.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 4, 2007 at 2:16 PM
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Shadow
Sweet thoughts and a soulful poem with which to begin your day....
posted by
Troosha
on April 4, 2007 at 1:25 PM
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posted by
NAJWA
on April 4, 2007 at 11:47 AM
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Very beautiful and loving..
posted by
Katray2
on April 4, 2007 at 10:30 AM
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Wonderful prayer .
posted by
afzal50
on April 4, 2007 at 9:28 AM
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wwooow, beautiful .......
posted by
star4sky5
on April 4, 2007 at 9:25 AM
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Hi Shadow - I hate it when I'm woken by noises.
The birds should be more respectful of our efforts to stay asleep as long as possible. That aside, a great little piece, touching in its intent!
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 4, 2007 at 8:41 AM
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