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Bhaskar - many thanks for your words of appreciation.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 7:53 AM
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shadow, some times people are so afraid to love because they have been
gone through that much.
posted by
star4sky5
on April 13, 2007 at 5:58 AM
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shadow_pen
Beautfully and tellingly expressed through words in great beauty.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 13, 2007 at 5:40 AM
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Afzal - I knew such pain probably touched a lot of people, hence
my dedication. I suppose, just to share the emotions makes us all stronger. Thanks for the comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:38 AM
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Chilitree - you stopping by and commenting is greatly appreciated.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:35 AM
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Tony - " Tortured old romantic", I love that expression!. I've long ago
bade farewell to such hurt & pain, just thought i'd buried it once and for all in poetic form.
Thanks for commenting.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:34 AM
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Troosha - I find it helps to write about it, though very much poetic ....
it's a sort of closure of a bad experience, but also part of a learning curve.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:31 AM
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Najwa - thanks for the read. Hope things are well with you.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:29 AM
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Moonspirit - I agree it should be that kind of poem we write once a
lifetime and banish it to be burned to ashes. But thoughts and dreams, unfortunately still linger.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:27 AM
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OTA - Happily we are all strong enough to overcome such traumatic
times, aren't we?
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 12:25 AM
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the terrible sadness of love lost or unfavored..
yes.. that scar runs deep
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 12, 2007 at 2:07 PM
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Would that I could banish all such thoughts and dreams forever. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on April 12, 2007 at 1:56 PM
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posted by
NAJWA
on April 12, 2007 at 11:55 AM
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Shadow
How beautiful although very sad. I'm sure most of us have experienced that kind of sorrow and pain. I certainly have....
posted by
Troosha
on April 12, 2007 at 10:11 AM
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Hi Shadow - you tortured old romantic. Enjoyed it!
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 12, 2007 at 8:07 AM
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Shadow...a great poem!
posted by
Chilitree
on April 12, 2007 at 7:53 AM
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It's a touching and passionate poem- written so well .
posted by
afzal50
on April 12, 2007 at 7:52 AM
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