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Bhaskar - Your comments are always so warm & sincere--
Thank you for the inspiration. Keep well friend.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 20, 2007 at 3:32 AM
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MandaLee - I appreciate you stopping by with your comment. thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 20, 2007 at 3:31 AM
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posted by
Amanda__
on April 18, 2007 at 5:39 PM
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Shadow
Salaam brother, and to our friend Hana as well. Let us pray always for an attitude of love my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 18, 2007 at 3:23 PM
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Excellent poem.
posted by
afzal50
on April 18, 2007 at 9:27 AM
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shadow-pen
Another classic from shadow's pen. You have endeared yourself to me with the depth of your thoughts and the felicity of your words. May I thank you?
p.s. I'll come back and memorize this.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 18, 2007 at 9:26 AM
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iam happy too shadow as i said there on the other blog let the people who want to create hate let them do but on the other side we will create love and let us see who will wil the love or the hate ..sure the love always will do ...
AND AS I SAID IT IS A VERY GREAT SATISFACTION TO SPREAD THE UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN FEW PEOPLE ..WORD BY WORD ..HANDS WITH HANDS ..SOUL WITH SOUL CAN CREATE ANOTHER LIFE ANOTHER NEW BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS ....FOR WHO WANT TO JOIN THE NEW WORLD WHICH IS BASED ON LOVE YOU ARE WELCOMED
FOR ALL HUMAN KIND
posted by
drohan254
on April 18, 2007 at 8:18 AM
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i wish you always strength which is based on the faith and humanity love dear shadow ...
posted by
drohan254
on April 18, 2007 at 8:12 AM
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Dear Hana - I am very happy to have made peace with a brother
from the USA. It was a wonderful gesture on his part to seek & find the peace his heart wanted, so I praise him highly for that. There's always a space for each of us to enjoy a peaceful life, co-existing with love and respect for one another. I thank you for your kind words of inspiration and assure you that your support for me & all muslims is highly appreciated. Yes we are always ready for love & forgiveness. I also thank you for praising my poetry which comes the inner sanctity of my heart which beats to the rhythm of the beautiful poetry of the Quran and my friends around me.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 8:07 AM
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Star - how's life? Selling any real estate yet?
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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peace and happiness to you.....
posted by
star4sky5
on April 18, 2007 at 7:33 AM
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SHADOW ARE YOU THERE STILL SEE MY COMMENT DOWN WHICH JUST NOW I WROTE. AND KEEP YOUR PEACE FRIEND I'M ALSO IN PEACE PRAYING FOR GOD TO GUIDE OUR LIFE
posted by
drohan254
on April 18, 2007 at 7:31 AM
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Wiley.Coyote - It is with deep respect that I say that I was wholly
moved by your comments above. I have come to learn, happily soon, that you are a far greater man than I originally thought. I accept you apology with humbleness and likewise wish to apologise to you if my words were sometimes harsh & might have caused you any pain or discomfort. We obviously share much in the wise words of Khalil Gibran and maybe some others, who speak of universal peace & harmony. I assure you that I accept you as a brother of mankind and endeavour to read your works in my ateempt to learn more about you.
I feel relieved that sensibilty & peace have prevailed, but then it takes a brave spirit & person to display compassion for a fellow human being. I salute you my friend & brother.
I also appeciate your kind comments re my poetry. I also bid you a peaceful day and may you find that which you seek to fulfil your life.
Salaam.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 7:13 AM
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OTA - your sharp mind is always right - yes a poet writes about his
solitude & mental blocks, but never surrenders to any dark & painful thoughts. There will always be a flicker in his heart & soul, inextinghuishable. It merely takes a beautiful muse to make him spring to life again, for love & life must go on. Thanks for the comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:56 AM
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Najwa - a warm comment from you always lighten up my screen....
My heartfelt thanks for your friendship & kind words.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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shadow dear iam here i was reading there where no one dare .the words are coming as poetry my dear because you deserve me to say to you a poetry ..there again he answered you and i was not aware about what happened on chapter ten today again that one used my words according to his wish which show his weakness he addressed it to you see it please i was going to leave love there but i will give it you here as you are great iam proud about you
and as you see each onre of us work alone but each one can face thousand of the haterd
we are here to create love not hate we are responding and not starting ...so let us see who is ready for the love the forgiveness which fill each muslim heart if they are ready to behave as humanbeingsorry dear that iam writing here on your poetry but for us the manners the ethics the religion is the most beautiful poetry .......................................
posted by
drohan254
on April 18, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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Hi Star- hope all this talk about solitude & despair doen't get you
down!. Your smile will soon change all that.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:50 AM
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Troosha - A poet's solitude is definitely different from others. It's that
mind struggle and search for answers to complex questions & situations. Yet one's patience and spiritual acceptance must also shine through when putting word to paper. That soft and warm touch must be present because poets are not suppose to despair eternally.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:48 AM
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Hana - Thank you for the beautiful words & inspiration. It means a lot
to me ! I trust you will find peace & happiness in all that you seek. May your spirit stay beautiful and warm.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:42 AM
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Tony- Very true, though I think there are more happier times
than lonely times. It's a matter how you handle those mental blocks & loneliness.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 18, 2007 at 6:40 AM
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shadow . and wiley..as you said there you are same here ...the beauty of the poets can lead to that love which wiley shows now thanks for him in deputy of you ....the true writer the true poets whom they are true humanbeing will never have hate even when some one think that they hate ..than
ks for your beautiful heart wiley and shadow contintue your love shadow
posted by
drohan254
on April 18, 2007 at 1:09 AM
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Good work, Shadow.
It's a successful analogy and also good on the emotional state of the lonely writer - as most writers are!
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 17, 2007 at 3:08 PM
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Shadow
How wonderful!!! What a fabulous description of the process, the dilemmas, the solitude of shaping words into poetry.
posted by
Troosha
on April 17, 2007 at 9:24 AM
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shadow-pen
Anybody that can write poetry this good can't possibly be bad.
So, for my part, I am sorry if you were offended by whatever I may have written in Naut's post.
I really don't make a habit of getting involved in religious debate, for the very reason it disturbs my own peace and now it seems yours. For that, I humbly apologize. It is not my nature to be mean or disheartening to a fellow human being.
Frankly, I agree with you about things like paranoia being a part of what makes us all tick over Islam or Muslims, and as a matter of fact I feel just as terrorized by Catholicism, and I was born to that.
Now, also because of the fact I am a recovering alcoholic with 39 years sobriety, just accept that knowledge I freely give to you, and understand that you are not communicating here with Mohammed, Mother Theresa or Michaelangelo.
Let us be at peace with one another, because I too am a great fan of Kahlil Gibran, and my really deep feeling and belief, is what he spoke to my heart years ago;
"If we were to do away with the various religions, we would find ourselves united and enjoying one great faith and religion, abounding in brotherhood."
So my brother, let us lay aside our personal belief's for the moment, while I offer to you an apology from my heart for my being verbally offensive, and in the spirit of the God of our individual understanding, you accept it.
Have a peace filled day. Salaam,
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 17, 2007 at 8:46 AM
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well expressed
posted by
star4sky5
on April 17, 2007 at 8:31 AM
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And love is always loud but in the silent roads in souls,,,,,,but the POET can tell his or her love in every song........there is no such rite or wrong in love,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on April 17, 2007 at 7:47 AM
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Shadow
yes.. and he must write anyway..for that is the thing of love.. must be shared .. must be spoken.. refusing to stay locked away.. or so I think..
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 17, 2007 at 6:29 AM
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