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posted by
star4sky5
on April 20, 2007 at 1:06 PM
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to all in blogtown
Time to say good night
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 10:23 PM
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proc
Thanks!! I hope you will continue to read
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 7:32 PM
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its really good. I like the way you have painted
the despair that brings this man to this low point. very very human.
posted by
proc
on April 19, 2007 at 7:03 PM
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Timmy
Oh, it's so hard to watch our kids take the wrong paths at the crossroads at times. I hear you. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 19, 2007 at 6:44 PM
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foliage
No, not a true story as far as I go. I thought about my son last year, he was in some trouble and I began to think of all of the bad things that could happen to him; the bad things that happen to many wayward teens. It brought me to this story. Luckily, he decided to take the straight and narrow.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 6:41 PM
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Timmy
"...an oral newspaper..." Very good. Is this a true story? It reads as such. If you're looking for editing suggestions, I have a couple. Instead of writing how you felt, describe it. The sensual feeling inside. When you wrote, 'full' before, what does that mean? Try to stay away from cliche sayings, I don't have the work in front of me to site. My apologies. If this is a true story, then I'm really sorry you had to live like this, but am grateful you're on Blogit and writing it out. My friend, the crack addict is missing as we speak. I wrote about him in my blog the last couple of days. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 19, 2007 at 6:37 PM
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taps
lol......maybe it was encouragement??
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 6:23 PM
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TIMMYTALES
My memory fails me on that one. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on April 19, 2007 at 6:19 PM
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taps
If memory serves me correctly, you gave me a pointer or two. I was writing this as I posted it.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 6:12 PM
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Holy grail
I am glad that you like it and hope that you will follow it to the end
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 6:11 PM
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offy
It was not hard to write about at all. I thought of my experiences and was worried about my son at the time. It all came together but is not based on this family.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 19, 2007 at 6:10 PM
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TIMMYTALES
It is good that you are reposting. I was reading it before you left. It is well written.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 19, 2007 at 5:25 PM
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Tim
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2007 at 4:46 PM
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What a tough story...but very well-written!!!
posted by
Holy_Grail
on April 19, 2007 at 3:36 PM
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TIM
This has to be really hard to write about..I sure give you credit for doing so and it is an intriguing life story...
posted by
Offy
on April 19, 2007 at 10:16 AM
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