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Thanks mneme and Arleen, thanks for the martini Arleen!
posted by
Discombobulated78
on April 26, 2007 at 1:17 PM
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I love a realist!
Great poem!
posted by
Rebirtha80
on April 25, 2007 at 1:37 PM
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discom
there are a lot of strands in there and it's true we don't always laugh as much as we did when we were children. It is still possible; just got to look beyond the walls.
posted by
mneme
on April 23, 2007 at 5:11 AM
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Thanks for all of your comments, and Tony I know what you mean
posted by
Discombobulated78
on April 22, 2007 at 11:50 AM
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Deeply true and well versed!
Drowned and forgotten, yet onward we stumble empty.
posted by
Katray2
on April 22, 2007 at 8:14 AM
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Discom- I am honoured, and you have written one poem but with many hues
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 22, 2007 at 6:11 AM
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78, another wonderful piece...well-done.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 21, 2007 at 9:47 PM
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Excellent, OTA.
Maybe our dilemma as adults is that we know too much. Children don't know how hard life can be sometimes when you have so much responsibility (including looking after children). Also, a lot of their laughter comes from cruelty, which we do not allow ourselves - quite rightly of course. I don't mean to disagree with you though - your poem has indeed inspired in me many thoughts. Well done!
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 21, 2007 at 1:44 PM
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I TRY TO LAUGH
IT'S GOOD FOR THE SOUL
posted by
Charnell_Lanay
on April 21, 2007 at 1:07 PM
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