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Great poetry. As always.
posted by
A-and-B
on May 5, 2007 at 3:45 PM
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well described, i could imagine her as i read...
posted by
littlemspickles
on April 26, 2007 at 4:11 AM
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Re: very nice images.--Proc,-- you like 'em, you got 'em...thanks...
posted by
scriber
on April 24, 2007 at 5:08 AM
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Re: you always surprise me by your choice of "heros"--Lindo--we all have
our moments, I guess...
posted by
scriber
on April 24, 2007 at 5:06 AM
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Re: drohan254--thanks much drohan, much appreciated...
posted by
scriber
on April 24, 2007 at 5:03 AM
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very beautiful scriber and as TAPsaid you make your heros alive
posted by
drohan254
on April 23, 2007 at 8:17 PM
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Re: true TAPS--because of the old eye witness to history major in col.
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 5:10 PM
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Re: very nice images. Thanks. I forget to say she needed a
....shave?
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 5:09 PM
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Scriber
You sure have a way of describing people that make them seem true to life.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 23, 2007 at 4:14 PM
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very nice images.
posted by
proc
on April 23, 2007 at 4:09 PM
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Re: Re: Nice poem--nice comment...thanks Scriber...
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 1:58 PM
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Re: Scriber--thanks much Kat02
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 1:56 PM
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Re: i like this--thanks Xeno-x, very kind...
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 1:55 PM
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Re: you always surprise me by your choice of "heros"--thanks Lindo...
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 1:54 PM
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Re: Nice poem--nice comment...
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 1:53 PM
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Scriber
Very nicey done I enjoyed this peice
posted by
Kat02
on April 23, 2007 at 1:39 PM
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i like this
posted by
Xeno-x
on April 23, 2007 at 1:36 PM
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you always surprise me by your choice of "heros"
You turn the spotlight on very unlikely characters, but this is what makes your writing unique. thoroughly enjoyed it.
posted by
lindo
on April 23, 2007 at 1:20 PM
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Nice poem
posted by
afzal50
on April 23, 2007 at 5:26 AM
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Re: scriber--FoliageGold--A coming out dance. lol.
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 5:06 AM
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Re: Well, it's as they say ...--Mademoiselle, I adapted...
posted by
scriber
on April 23, 2007 at 5:02 AM
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scriber
oh my. and just what kind of dancing was this?
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 23, 2007 at 4:52 AM
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Well, it's as they say ...
Happiness is not a circus clown rolling around in a big tractor tire so that his arms and legs form 'spokes'. Happiness is when he stops.
P.S. You "adapt" from your own material? Or did you mean to write "excerpted"?
It's just another manic Monday
I wish it was Sunday
'Cause that's my funday
My I don't have to runday
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 23, 2007 at 4:47 AM
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