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Out of this world! So creativity water flows through rock, this is unreal!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 11, 2009 at 4:25 PM
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water.........river..........ocean, a beautiful topic, very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on May 5, 2007 at 5:00 PM
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patman, yes, water is the perfect shape-shifter..always compliant
much moreso than we humans are. ...
welcome to Blogit..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 5, 2007 at 4:18 PM
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Patman - water is a great subject for a poem, it's under-appreciated.
There are a lot of poems about rivers etc. but not many about water itself and it's quality. in fact, you have concentrated on only one aspect of water here, so it's a very focussed poem, also contrasting it with our destructive nature. Very well done, Patman!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 5, 2007 at 6:41 AM
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Nice poem. WEll expressed .
posted by
afzal50
on May 5, 2007 at 12:16 AM
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What a well written piece...
posted by
dark_mistress
on May 4, 2007 at 11:01 PM
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Patman
Hey, what's up. Water is smarter because it doesn't think. It just is. I have been waiting for you to post. I enjoy your blogs.very interesting.
posted by
snubnose
on May 4, 2007 at 9:41 PM
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