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OK. I get this one.
posted by
WindTapper
on May 14, 2007 at 9:32 PM
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Beautiful Scriber...I miss my mom too!
posted by
RckyMtnActivist
on May 14, 2007 at 6:26 AM
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Forceful but somehow delicate too. Very nicely done.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on May 13, 2007 at 9:37 PM
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Always a better tomorrow...
Your poem was beautifully written. I sense a lot of love behind your words....namaste, BlueEagle...x
posted by
BlueEagle
on May 13, 2007 at 5:45 PM
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beautiful!
posted by
Amanda__
on May 13, 2007 at 4:30 PM
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Scriber - i liked this line a lot...
I feel her most on lonely nights
when
tears betray my sorrow.
posted by
littlemspickles
on May 13, 2007 at 1:37 PM
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Re: proc---very nice of you. thanks.
posted by
scriber
on May 12, 2007 at 3:58 PM
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Re: Very nicely written--thanks Chris...
posted by
scriber
on May 12, 2007 at 3:57 PM
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Re: scriber--thanks FoliageGold,
posted by
scriber
on May 12, 2007 at 3:56 PM
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This made me cry.......so sad but real.
posted by
FoliageGold
on May 12, 2007 at 3:43 PM
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Very nicely written-or-re-written.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 12, 2007 at 6:05 AM
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As a man you may not appreciate my comment but this is so sweet.
posted by
proc
on May 12, 2007 at 5:57 AM
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WEll said .
posted by
afzal50
on May 12, 2007 at 5:33 AM
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Re: thanks NAJWA--a true friend;
posted by
scriber
on May 12, 2007 at 5:16 AM
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Scribes...
And a nice re-write it is.
posted by
Transcendental_Child
on May 12, 2007 at 4:43 AM
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o my friend tonight we are on the same lane in the momemories of love and pain there are pure souls swimming on our blue sky without rain connecting our pens in the womder Land I love your words it is sad but pure honest feeling and embracing the wind at my dark window,,,,,,,,,,,there is misty Dawn write now smile with me.....
........the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on May 12, 2007 at 4:22 AM
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