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Thank you all very much!
I have and will write more poems about schizophrenia,but not all my poems will handle about it.
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 3:46 AM
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Well done, IP - a well-expressed piece - I know what you mean!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 14, 2007 at 12:37 AM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on May 13, 2007 at 6:13 PM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on May 13, 2007 at 6:13 PM
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IronicParadox---well done-you have conveyed what I understand a little of.
It is good for us to try to understand as much as we can-about this illness.Thank you for sharing part of yourself in this way.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 13, 2007 at 1:21 PM
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I understand this
posted by
Lanetay
on May 13, 2007 at 1:13 PM
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Re: Dharma Initiate
First of all,thank you for your nice comment.The "splinter in my happiness" I talk about,is my schizophrenia.And when I think about my long lost love,this feeling helps me to feel less pain.Strange thing you'd say when the love is lost,but in the remains of the lost love are only positive feelings,because nothing really ends.I hope this answers your question.Have a nice day!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 13, 2007 at 1:08 PM
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I liked the poem, and especially how the repetition and short lines made me "feel" what the words were saying. But all of it seemed like pretty common experiences to me. Why/how is it about schizophrenia?
posted by
tyler1984
on May 13, 2007 at 12:56 PM
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Re: Relatable and well expressed
Thank you!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 13, 2007 at 12:33 PM
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Relatable and well expressed
Good poem.
posted by
Katray2
on May 13, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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