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Ironic
You are so right. Our imaginations as readers do take on personal meaning. I've had a difficult year, yes, so that was in the forefront of my read. Now that you explain it I feel so much better. But should I? Hurricanes are nothing to sneeze at, either. Very good thought-inducing work.
posted by
FoliageGold
on May 14, 2007 at 11:49 AM
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Re: Hard lessons
Hehe,you can understand that line in so many ways.
A hard lesson from Mother Earth could be for example, a hurricane,earthquakes,erupting vulcanos but also smaller things like a bee that stings you,clouds that throw down their rain,a tree that loses its fruit and it gets rotten before you can taste nature's delight..etc.
It could be so many things and doesn't have to be something terrible.Let's just say ,you fill the meaning in with your own imagination.When I was writing that poem I was thinking of a heavy rain that really drenched me and winds that tore me down,for me it was a hard hit but was good for me ,because I felt good getting struck by so much power...Anyway ,good thing of you noticing that.Hope your versions weren't to hard ,like as having to lose someone dear to you,or having a terrible disease or something.What I mean actually ; I wish you all the best!!!And thank you for your comment!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 11:40 AM
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Ironic
Came in here to see what riri was so excited about. lol Asking for hard lessons, oh dear, I've had enough of those. Good work!
posted by
FoliageGold
on May 14, 2007 at 11:13 AM
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Re: nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 11:01 AM
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nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
riri0322
on May 14, 2007 at 10:58 AM
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Re: Well said...
Thank you!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 10:57 AM
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Re: Re: AlexDelarge
thanks mate!!!
posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 10:57 AM
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Re: NAJWA
Thanks for your comment,uplifting as always

posted by
IronicParadox
on May 14, 2007 at 10:56 AM
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Well said...
posted by
Ariala
on May 14, 2007 at 8:35 AM
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true!!
and you're neve alone!
posted by
AlexDelarge
on May 14, 2007 at 8:30 AM
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SUCH a BEAUTIFUL POEM AND I love the word MOTHER EARTH
WELL:...
......your poems are always UNIQUE meaning and framed in powerful and inside it Passion for LOVE and LIVING....
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THE STRANGER
posted by
NAJWA
on May 14, 2007 at 8:19 AM
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