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Great read heartfelt we have learn in relation some just hit and move.
Some kind of great hurt just dare to learn for the next time.

posted by Mystereo on January 17, 2009 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

u will move on
quickly

posted by Sudanym_ on May 17, 2007 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: If u never c me than this wil never be real. I will die & wither in fantasy
Life isn't real. Only pain is real.

posted by Sudanym_ on May 17, 2007 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

If u never c me than this wil never be real. I will die & wither in fantasy

posted by dark_mistress on May 17, 2007 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Good work, Patman!
Especially at the end.

posted by Antonionioni on May 17, 2007 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

It's a lovely love poem.

posted by afzal50 on May 16, 2007 at 11:40 PM | link to this | reply

lisen to you till the last moment.....

posted by star4sky5 on May 16, 2007 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

I have no words for this except my tears of offering...

posted by dark_mistress on May 16, 2007 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply