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Been a while and this read held me. The thoughts and creativity. Awsome!

posted by Mystereo on January 17, 2010 at 2:32 AM | link to this | reply

good night

posted by star4sky5 on May 28, 2007 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Thats so well written my babe. I like this...love u babe

posted by dark_mistress on May 27, 2007 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

WEll expressed .Nice poem.

posted by afzal50 on May 27, 2007 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hey pat, who told you to wear my shoes, just leave my shoes alone..........
I feel the same, but my brain don't let me believe.........SO I ROCK ON WITH THE SUNDAY INDE

posted by star4sky5 on May 27, 2007 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply