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You will like some of my music. For you go outside the box and keep it real
Deep read!! You still growing with you crafted. One of your old saying stays with me. Greedhead what you going to do when you have to eat money. Something like that. Nice reading your work again. You have really grown grasshopper!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 17, 2010 at 2:45 AM
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It's certainly nearly right!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 1, 2007 at 10:50 AM
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Still dnt like it but ur right...ur frigging right
posted by
dark_mistress
on June 1, 2007 at 4:40 AM
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WEll expressed !!! Nice poem indeed .
posted by
afzal50
on May 31, 2007 at 7:09 PM
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Hey, wado i no?
posted by
Sudanym_
on May 31, 2007 at 5:34 PM
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Well written my babe, but...
I don't like it. K? Sorry. But like I said what a boring world if we all agreed. So we'll have to agree to disagree on this one. It's not your writing I don't like it's just the subject matter on this one.
posted by
dark_mistress
on May 31, 2007 at 5:28 PM
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