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muser
Thank you ... I'd be happy to just improve the reality in my imaginary LOL . Got to keep writing, and keep trying :)
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:37 AM
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FoliageGold
Thanks for your thoughts, I hope so too. I never went to the Mouse House, I must put it on my list.
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:32 AM
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avant-garde
Thanks - secretly I think we are all really just kids at heart.
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:29 AM
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bhaskar
thanks for the comments - hope I will get there again to relive that "past in the future".
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:27 AM
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Taps
Thanks, I never tired of it. I like to walk along the beach too. I am more comfortable after a week and in another week I should be fine.
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:21 AM
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Thanks, afzal ! Nice to see you.
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 3:18 AM
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This was so, so sweet, mneme...so nostalgic, and yet so right now...Disney
really brings imaginations to life, and what a thrill to visit a place where the imaginary is reality!
...if we could only find the place where we could do that with all of our dreams...
posted by
muser
on June 7, 2007 at 4:58 AM
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mneme
Nicely done! I feel like a kid again after reading this.
posted by
avant-garde
on June 5, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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mneme
The alliterative effect has been used with great sensitivity, and lends a comtinuity to the varied thoughts of the past, present and a reliving of the past in the future too. Good work
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 3, 2007 at 7:28 AM
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mneme
Hope things work out for you very soon. This was a lovely musing on playing and I'd love to go the Mouse House too!
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 2, 2007 at 2:58 PM
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mneme
I'm so sorry about the fall. I hope you will be all right soon. I loved the poem. You have it exactly right--the way it is. My grandchildren never tire of it. They do not understand that when I visit them, I would rather just visit with them in their natural habitat and see them as they live their daily lives. They cannot imagine I would rather take a walk at Silver Springs or climb the stairs to the top of Ponce de Leon Lighthouse, or walk barefoot on the beach collecting seashells.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 2, 2007 at 12:51 PM
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Wonderful poem ! Well said .
posted by
afzal50
on June 2, 2007 at 5:37 AM
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Goodnight friends
It's been quite a day. Enjoy your day whatever your time zone.
posted by
mneme
on June 2, 2007 at 5:36 AM
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ariala
Yes we do, and when I am fit again I intend to do just that.
posted by
mneme
on June 2, 2007 at 5:16 AM
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azur
Thanks...:) not entirely. I found I couldn't sit in the car and drive today because my neck is very painful. My ribs ache a bit if I breathe deeply. I'm just taking it easy today. I did go to the medical centre to check nothing was too badly wrong, we don't bounce like little kids.
posted by
mneme
on June 2, 2007 at 5:15 AM
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We all need to play more...
posted by
Ariala
on June 2, 2007 at 4:51 AM
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Mneme
Whimsy indeed. Hope you are OK after the fall?
posted by
Azur
on June 2, 2007 at 4:46 AM
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