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This was my favorite out of everything I read. Short and right on target. Subtle and dark. Great work!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 13, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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saul relative
Thanks so much, saul... nice to see you. :)
posted by
Temple
on July 4, 2007 at 1:26 AM
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Holy Grail
Thanks HG.... yeah... it's sad. What can I say...
posted by
Temple
on July 4, 2007 at 1:25 AM
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teddy
Ah, you've gone down to one name like "Prince" or "Madonna" ... or maybe "Picasso" is a better, more artistic example? :) Sorry to be gone so long, life does get in the way. I'm so happy to see you here, and glad you liked it. I hope all is well with you... I desperately need to catch up.
xo
posted by
Temple
on July 4, 2007 at 12:43 AM
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drohan254
Nice to "meet" you... thanks so much for reading and leaving a footprint. I seem to do best in the tortured places. A blessing... a curse? ... of the artist perhaps? I'm glad that you liked it though ... there will be happier ones to come. (fingers crossed) ;)
posted by
Temple
on July 4, 2007 at 12:41 AM
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afzal
Thank you! I was rather happy with the flow of this one myself. :)
posted by
Temple
on July 4, 2007 at 12:39 AM
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Excellent, Temple.
posted by
saul_relative
on June 30, 2007 at 9:29 PM
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Well I agree with Teddy but it makes me sad.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on June 13, 2007 at 5:53 PM
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Finally a chance to read you again ...still wonderful work, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 13, 2007 at 4:11 AM
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sad and beautifully written temple
posted by
drohan254
on June 13, 2007 at 1:39 AM
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WEll expressed ! Good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on June 13, 2007 at 12:07 AM
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