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Re: Re: Re: no I don't....
finally....honesty from you....no I will keep commenting if you don't mind. Thank you....I will look at my conversations and take your advice. I am glad you confimed this for me...I was so confused everyone telling me I was good, and them saying no you aren't. I can take it so give it to me once in awhile friend.
posted by
Irish3
on June 16, 2007 at 12:30 PM
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Re: Re: no I don't....
I am going to be honest right now this will probably ruin what we have but you want the truth and this is also bye just in case you don't click on my stories anymore or my poetry. And you can take back everything you said about me being a good writer. o.k. here it goes, the grammer part you pass on that. the dialogue very cliche they are 100 percent right. when i read your work it does sound like not an up to date STYLE STYLE UP TO DATE STYLE TYPE OF WRITING TYPE OF WRITING UP TO DATE lts lIKE YOU LOCKED YOUR SELF IN TO A ROOM and read 1000's of old romance novels and said I want to be a novelist or an author. the only thing is that you didn't read any thing else. Sorry. but dialogue dialogue DIALOGUE YOUR DIALOGUE IS PERFECT THEY LOSE ON THAT PART THEY LOOSE ON THAT PART cliched you lose Cliche you lose. This is the truth about you as a writer you have what it takes You need to be up to date your wording. Read the news paper. Watch the news. subcribe to writer's digest that will really help YOU. WRITER'S DIGEST WRITER'S DIGEST WILL HELP YOU .WHEN you go to the grocery store listen in on conversations. How to save your soul. don't become a writer to what they totally want which is mainstream. i am starting to fall off the deep end I am gone now. Good bye.
posted by
davi7
on June 16, 2007 at 12:15 PM
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Re: no I don't....
how can I, here's examples and I quote "I suggest you take a course, as grammar is very important. The dialogue is very cliched, study how people really talk. My heroine seems to lack motivation." Then I scored low in almost every category on my score card example....did they like my hero and heroine? no Do you feel the sexual tension between them? no. Is the scene fresh and clear? again no. The list goes on. I feel like a grade school kid getting my hand slapped and I really thought my submission was good. Well poor me huh wish I knew who those right people were Samson.
posted by
Irish3
on June 16, 2007 at 11:55 AM
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You need to hook up with the right people your writing is out standing don't you think so
posted by
davi7
on June 16, 2007 at 10:27 AM
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Re: circuit
Thanks for stopping by....
posted by
Irish3
on June 16, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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posted by
circuit
on June 16, 2007 at 7:43 AM
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Re: Irish
Foliage......truly thank you....I like your writing too, so this means a lot. She has every right not to trust him huh?
posted by
Irish3
on June 16, 2007 at 7:21 AM
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Irish
Dunno if I'd believe him.
You're a good writer and I think your work is very publishable. Well done.
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 16, 2007 at 7:14 AM
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