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Re: Nicely done, Scramble. Love that ending...
Thanks for popping in saul relative-good to see you and thanks for response! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 27, 2007 at 3:15 AM
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Re: Send that cat over here around five a.m. ...
Ha Ha-teddy--I might just do that! We have Aviaries with Budgies etc. and she KNOWS not to touch our 'free' Doves-because the first time she tried-I turned the Hose full pelt on her! Wicked! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 27, 2007 at 3:14 AM
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Nicely done, Scramble. Love that ending...
posted by
saul_relative
on June 26, 2007 at 12:36 PM
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Send that cat over here around five a.m. ...
like sleeping in an aviary...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 26, 2007 at 12:26 PM
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Re: Scramble..
Hello Powder Jolez--many thanks for popping in ! I think I petrified her when I screamed and shocked her into deserting her would be prey!!!! (Thankfully!) It doesn't happen every time! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 12:16 PM
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Scramble..
Nice! So you were the savior of a family of Robins just by feeding the kitty. I wish it were that easy to distract my cat lol.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on June 26, 2007 at 11:56 AM
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Re: Exciting and beautiful poem!
I'm pleased you enjoyed that one-IronicParadox-thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 11:53 AM
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Re: Well done
MadamShyness-hello-thank you very much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 11:52 AM
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Re: Scramble
Thank you so much Troosha!
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 11:51 AM
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Re: Chris - The way of cats for certain. My RIP, 'Beauty' used to catch
Mary many thanks indeed! Yoy say 'my RIP,'Beauty'
used to catch-I'm sorry she is gone now! But-Hummingbirds-my goodness! This is the first time Robins have laid eggs in OUR garden-what a privilege-I'd HATE them to be killed-especialy by our cat! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 11:50 AM
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Exciting and beautiful poem!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 26, 2007 at 11:07 AM
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Well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 26, 2007 at 10:02 AM
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Scramble
How sweet - you took a real life moment and crafted a playful poem!
posted by
Troosha
on June 26, 2007 at 9:25 AM
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Chris - The way of cats for certain. My RIP, 'Beauty' used to catch
Hummingbirds and drove me batty. This was a lovely poem, well-written and very true to life. Well done!
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 26, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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Re: Hello my friend NAJWA! Very many thank you's! I don't let her out at
night-otherwise Nature would not rest!!! Ha Ha.Sometimes she wakes us to try to get out-but---I encourage her back to bed! Love Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 8:40 AM
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IS she a cat or a woman watch her in the night she has never sleep it is very unique poem my friend and salty name..
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the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on June 26, 2007 at 8:23 AM
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Re: Nice poem ! well written !
Thanks very much afzal. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 26, 2007 at 7:35 AM
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Nice poem ! well written !
posted by
afzal50
on June 26, 2007 at 7:07 AM
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