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Re: Gavel...
Sure, I'm always up for observations and constructive critisism(however you spell...lol..). Glad your enjoying it. I would like to some day get it published...we'll see where the story goes once I get it caught up to the current time. :)

posted by gavelkorbald on July 5, 2007 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

Gavel...
I'm getting caught up on this story and I am truly enjoying it. The character, Tylen is an interesting mix. I would like to suggest that someone do some editing for you before you send this out to be published... I do believe it should be published! After I finish reading it more thoroughly I would like to email you some of my observations if that is ok with you?

posted by RedHeadedGypsy on July 2, 2007 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply