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You write like a cursed demon who has somehow stumbled into the human realm. Every word that scribbles onto your pages always resonates in my soul, slices and I don't know why. Excellent...
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 2, 2007 at 8:00 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on July 2, 2007 at 7:50 PM
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Strong clues, excellent verse
posted by
Katray2
on July 2, 2007 at 7:24 PM
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posted by
jacentaOld
on July 2, 2007 at 7:21 PM
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Great poem ! I agree with your concluding lines .
posted by
afzal50
on July 2, 2007 at 7:21 PM
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Exactly, laughter comes so rarely.
posted by
circuit
on July 2, 2007 at 7:10 PM
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