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Re: very good, but might she not have sensed or heard him approaching even
Dear great editor....note rewrite thanks
posted by
Irish3
on July 3, 2007 at 8:35 PM
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Re: Re: Re: very good, Right. I think it was an editor that said, "There are
Well then on that issue please be my great editor....and I will be eternally grateful seriously
posted by
Irish3
on July 3, 2007 at 5:44 AM
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Re: Re: very good, Right. I think it was an editor that said, "There are
no great writers, just great editors."
posted by
scriber
on July 3, 2007 at 5:29 AM
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Re: very good, but might she not
I was writing in a hurry, but yeah I hadn't considered that idea and I love it really thank you. You are finally gettin this....I want your input...it makes me happy to consider what I may not see from another perspective....please always feel free to be honest and tell me what you think will improve me....
posted by
Irish3
on July 3, 2007 at 5:10 AM
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very good, but might she not have sensed or heard him approaching even
if she was totally lapping from the fount? Minor point. Overall excellent. Like, Sennsing his approach, she stopped drinkingk, turned and said, "Oh, you scared the shit out of me. Don't be a creap and creep up on me. Just kiddding!" But really she wasn't but why spoil a budding friendship. She could always think of a way to get his ass later and teach him a thing or two.
posted by
scriber
on July 3, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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Re: knowing him name.
Damon, thanks for the correction, I hate when I miss something....I do so want my posts to be perfect thank you sooooo much for pointing it out not letting it go. I'm obsessive that way but I truly appreciate it really thank you and I'm glad you love this. Check Davi 7 when she writes she writes alone...they intermingle by choice we kind of just go back an forth it's cool.
posted by
Irish3
on July 3, 2007 at 4:16 AM
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knowing him name.
knowing him name. She decided to get a drink from the fountain while she summoned her nerve.--knowing his name. I love this Irish.
Catch more of it later!
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 2, 2007 at 11:36 PM
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Re: Re: There were no birds there, is it?:-)
Is this for me or Straight foward Davi? I know where the birds are I helped create them.
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 8:29 PM
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Re: There were no birds there, is it?:-)
Ya, there were birds there. I am surprise, you didn't see them. There were so many of them.
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davi7
on July 2, 2007 at 8:19 PM
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Re: There were no birds there, is it?:-)
Check out Davi7 last post....and compare you will find it interesting thanks.
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 8:17 PM
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Re: Re: It's easy....been thinking about
You are fine....but you need to take care of that tooth, and maybe lay down...talk tomorrow okay? Irish
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 8:16 PM
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There were no birds there, is it?:-)
posted by
Straightforward
on July 2, 2007 at 8:15 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: It's easy....been thinking about
You know more than what you show which is cool, I think. Your writng is excellent really it is.... Wait O I am doing it again. I am starting to fall off the deep end. I think i don't know what i am saying.
posted by
davi7
on July 2, 2007 at 8:13 PM
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Re: an awesome meeting...xxxooo
Thanks Hazel....not so hot this one is pure romance if you have been following it.
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 8:05 PM
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Re: Re: Re: It's easy....been thinking about
Smart??? what do you mean silly?
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 8:04 PM
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an awesome meeting...xxxooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on July 2, 2007 at 8:02 PM
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Re: Re: It's easy....been thinking about
i think you write smart
posted by
davi7
on July 2, 2007 at 8:00 PM
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Re: Star4you thanks so much
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 7:54 PM
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Re: It's easy....been thinking about
how I wanted this to go....they had to meet, and so I cheated kind of. I'm not that good believe me do you like it I do?
posted by
Irish3
on July 2, 2007 at 7:53 PM
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wow, that blew away the small entry I wrote. It is good. You are fast. I can't believe you wrote all of that so fast. You are to good.
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davi7
on July 2, 2007 at 7:51 PM
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star4sky5
on July 2, 2007 at 7:48 PM
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