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Very nice - the first few lines remind me of Yeats' poem (He Wishes for the Cloths of Heaven) "Tread softly for you tread on my dreams".. (or 'because you tread on my dreams', in one version).
posted by
mneme
on July 17, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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Hi Notapoet - many thanks!!!!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 13, 2007 at 12:47 AM
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Right on!
Especially the quoting scripture line. I don't think I've ever heard it said better.
posted by
notapoet
on July 12, 2007 at 11:07 PM
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Thank you everyone!!!!!
I'm back and going to post a quick one tonight so i might have time to do other things - heaven forbid! My vacation - holiday - call it what you will - was pretty good - the sun actually shone enough to burn my head!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 10, 2007 at 11:06 AM
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Antonio-yo-yo - Where are you? I miss you.......
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 8, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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Hope you're having a nice break somewhere where it's not raining, Tony.
We must have that pint soon. I'll have a bit of spare time as August arrives...
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 8, 2007 at 9:46 AM
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I join Proc in saying, u are refreshingly original.And good for the Planet
so never apologize for what you have to share about life and politics (the game for po' LIEticks) shalom Tony& safe travels and happy return2sonnets
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 7, 2007 at 9:16 AM
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its okay Antonioioni, we understand where you coming from. You're straight
up and I respect that. I too get angry at hypocrisy especially when it comes from so-called christians but I wont let hypocrites stop me from knowing,loving and serving God.
posted by
proc
on July 6, 2007 at 6:14 PM
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very good and helpful after my day lol
posted by
Problem_Girl
on July 6, 2007 at 5:34 AM
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I like this one...
and have a good time away
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 6, 2007 at 5:08 AM
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Excellent
would agree with some parts not with others but excellently written nonetheless and food for thought - enjoy your time off
posted by
mariaki
on July 6, 2007 at 3:28 AM
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very interesting....I agree with alot of what you said....hehehe
Take care, don't stay away too long..
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 6, 2007 at 2:54 AM
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Antonio
As important a reality as it is, I still don't think life is always, all about the "haves" and "have-nots." It's certainly part of it...but there's still so much more!!! 
posted by
Enigmatic68
on July 5, 2007 at 11:02 PM
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Antonirebelonio I like it....you make sense and I love the dig at the self
rightous preacht types who hide behind sanctiminious crap.
posted by
Kabu
on July 5, 2007 at 8:47 PM
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Brilliant--you are so right Tony! But-as you rightly say-what's the use of
trying to complai---no one listens---or perhaps---cares abot the un-fairness of our society!Have a lovely week end--weather supposed to be good Sat/Sund.take care-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 5, 2007 at 12:48 PM
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Antonio
I'm with you on this one. There's not many of us out here who haven't felt that those who do wrong prosper while the good seem to get the raw end. Enjoy your time out and I look forward to reading more later.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on July 5, 2007 at 12:01 PM
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to rebel or not to rebel.. cool sonnet Tony! ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 5, 2007 at 11:32 AM
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rebellion ROCKS!
keep on going tony! Great to read you
posted by
pelagus
on July 5, 2007 at 11:23 AM
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Antonio-yo-yo - Wow! You outdid yourself with this one. I read it
5 times! BRAVA!
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 5, 2007 at 10:54 AM
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well written...rebellion is okay now and then
posted by
nenkai04
on July 5, 2007 at 10:02 AM
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