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Re: SORRY!
La_Paloma, Don't worry about it. That's a great poem by the way. I don't have a clue about deleting comments either. I only know how to delete my own poems, which I have done a time or two. We will just leave it there as an advertisment for you if that is okay with you.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 11, 2007 at 6:20 AM
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SORRY!
Damond
i'm sorry that i've added my post to your comment. I was about to comment but at the same time, i'm writing my post in word.
sorry...! and i don't know how to delete this.
Truly sorry! This is my second time! sorry!!!!
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 10, 2007 at 9:41 PM
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NONE CAN BE SAID
My mind is filled up with thoughts
which most can’t be said.
O how I wish I could let it out.
I’m just too afraid;
fearful of rejection,
afraid of shame.
I’ve never known
what if I say it all.
Will it be considered real –
Or just lies to others?
I wonder
if my words are believable.
The dumbest thing
that I’ve ever done.
Or maybe
It’s unimportant to others
what’s in my mind.
I wonder if he’ll agree
With what I have to say :
Or he’ll just laughs;
and make me like a dumb or a fool.
I should keep myself quiet,
Never ever unfold the truth.
I just don’t say a word,
Should I just don’t show my true self?
My mind fills up with thoughts,
Some scary while some are not.
I don’t say a word
For none can be said.
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 10, 2007 at 9:37 PM
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Re: Damon, nice one
Hi Irish,
Laughter is the best medicine, or so they say. Tnanks for coming by. I will be by your pages soon.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 9, 2007 at 2:36 AM
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Re: Hello my friend.....
Good morning be by to read you in a little while.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 9, 2007 at 2:34 AM
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Damon, nice one
Isn't it funny sometimes the things we feel are the blame of us having a bad turn of fate aren't that at all. Sometimes it's just the way it is, like the humor laughing is medicine.lol
posted by
Irish3
on July 8, 2007 at 3:27 PM
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Hello my friend.....
posted by
Chilitree
on July 8, 2007 at 12:55 PM
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Re: cute poem
Julia, of course it could be worse as they say, "It is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all."
Thanks for commenting!
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 12:22 PM
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Re: Damond - Oh my, well done! Visually, it reminds me of a Christmas
FoliageGold, yes the narrator was very well lit when he won the lady back. Unfortunately his light as usual didn't stay lit for long.
Thanks for commenting.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 12:20 PM
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cute poem
--and it could be worse, eh??
posted by
Julia.
on July 6, 2007 at 10:01 AM
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Damond - Oh my, well done! Visually, it reminds me of a Christmas
tree.
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 6, 2007 at 7:34 AM
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Re: Sometimes you just can't win, can you, Damond?
MaggieMae, it seems like that I have a hard time winning at all.
Thanks for commenting.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 6:59 AM
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Sometimes you just can't win, can you, Damond?
You did a good job on this. Fun reading.
posted by
MaggieMae
on July 6, 2007 at 4:08 AM
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Re: Seems like
mariaki, I just wasn't meant to win I guess. Thanks for commenting.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 3:19 AM
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Seems like
you can't win in some situations e?
posted by
mariaki
on July 6, 2007 at 2:55 AM
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Re: Nice poem.I enjoyed it.
circuit Thanks so much for commenting on A Wreck II.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 1:11 AM
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Nice poem.I enjoyed it.
posted by
circuit
on July 6, 2007 at 12:58 AM
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Re:
afzal Thank you my friend.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on July 6, 2007 at 12:49 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on July 5, 2007 at 11:55 PM
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