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Re: Riri, hey happy Saturday to you.....
hope you have a wonderful weekend.
posted by
Irish3
on July 28, 2007 at 6:02 AM
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posted by
riri0322
on July 27, 2007 at 9:31 PM
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Re: Irish - Yes, darling lady. Mary....yes....I know what you mean...
Neil is a true gentle man....he's kind and inspiring and he honors you completely with his praise. A kinder gentler man I've never know. His heart is pure golden and his intensions so pure and loving. He warms my heart when he visits and leaves me flowers...
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 8:15 PM
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Irish - Yes, darling lady. And well deserved. However, I must say I have
never been so honoured in my whole life as his most recent post.........
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 27, 2007 at 8:07 PM
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Re: Durbin - Now how come Irish gets prettier flowers than me?
Mary it's my prize for winning silly....I get extra clicks or flowers remember? lol
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 8:05 PM
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Re: Provocative and warm, Irish! RaeS thank you....
I wanted to know if I did it right....I didn't really know how it was supposed to be, thank you truly....I'll fix it now.lol
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 7:55 PM
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Re: Thanks for making Mary jealous....
I love my flowers just fine....my sweet friend.
warmheartbeatshappily Shalom
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 7:53 PM
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Re: no dear one i am still cathcing up before i go--that's blogit for me! this
Okay so I'll try again later okay and keep it to nature wouldn't want the Buddhists rolling in their graves.... I'm not real clear on making it my own? maybe I'm just sleepy.... maybe you could help me write one? So I'm clear or give me an example to follow closely? thanks....I never called you old-fashioned...I called you an expert....lol Shalom.
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 7:51 PM
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Durbin - Now how come Irish gets prettier flowers than me?
I'm pouting! Ha ha, ha, they're lovely as are your teaching words this evening. Thank you.
P.S. I did write Tony to warn him of my own mess. ha ha
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 27, 2007 at 7:45 PM
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2007 at 7:42 PM
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Provocative and warm, Irish!
Haiku is 5,7,5. The second line needs two more syllables - I'm sure you can think of something if so inclined, lol..Great mood and work!
posted by
Katray2
on July 27, 2007 at 7:41 PM
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no dear one i am still cathcing up before i go--that's blogit for me! this
is just as Foliage Gold has already observed --you do have the two flashes of imagery...the Zen Buddhists will be rolling intheir graves as they usually avoided talking of human love, only
obsevations of Nature--no satire, no pun, no double entendre. YET - u must make the senryu (modern haiku) your own just as Americans (now Canadians like Jopy!Mary) love the form they love and thus earn the rIGHT to make it work for their themes/ideas/objectives in writing. I am not that old-fashioned see? shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2007 at 7:40 PM
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Re: Irish - I don't know about haiku. Ironically, I just posted my very first
Need to ask an expert but he's not in lol....thanks for reading and the kind thoughts....I'll slid over and read yours before calling it a night....see you tomorrow, good night.
posted by
Irish3
on July 27, 2007 at 7:34 PM
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Irish - I don't know about haiku. Ironically, I just posted my very first
sonnet tonight! However, I LOVE the sentiments expressed in your haiku.
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 27, 2007 at 7:29 PM
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